Pitch Presentation

We were asked to create a presentation which would be pitched to my class members. This pitch had to include certain sections so I could include the correct information needed.  For example I had to include;

• Brief
• Initial Idea
• Summer Work
• Inspirational Texts
• Institutes
• Target Audience

After looking at the guidelines for the presentation I then made a plan so when it came to creating the presentation I knew exactly what to include. This plan included  questions that I would answer in my presentation. For example what I chose for my brief and why. The purpose of this was so we could share our ideas around the class. We were then ordered to have the presentation up on our computers, then we would move around a seat at a time and leave feedback for the presentations. I then used my plan and produced the following presentation.

Once they had seen my pitch they were then asked to leave feedback for me. This feedback included two positives and a wish.

Here is my feedback;

I received good feedback on my knowledge of who I want my target audience to be, they also liked my use of inspirational texts. However the constructive criticism was that I should include who would produce the magazine, the name of the magazine and more regional magazines. I do plan on making the changes however I am yet to find a regional fashion magazine to use in my research and planning.